Oopsy !!

A heavy storm is moving inside.Begin at the central climbing up to the high. All at one it gets back to the central once again. Suddenly, a thunder is rumbling with a stinky freezing wind blowing through. Slowly and slowly the pain is walking over my stomach. Without delay,I am runing to the TOILET !!!



Rain

I am living a lone in the dark tiny room, hearing wisper of the raindrop onto my roof. The rain grandually falls softly againts my old window. In the same time freshing earthy smell drift around my nose.



This is a distinctive of the rain first falls on the dry eart.Unexpectedly, a cold drop of water falls on my head. I am looking up through the roof , Oh!! it's broken

People's look



On sweltering day, there's a man with frown face, who deny any comfortable vehichles, is riding a white donkey for work. He's wearing his uniform as usual, white shirt, dark blue pants and black shoes. And he's also wearing brown leather jacket for protecting his skin from sun damage. Last but not the least, he's wearing white turban to show  his identity and conserve his costom. For sure, the the turban is suitable with his Arab face that grows a full beard. His skin is tan,it is the significant that he is hard working man

USING SENSORY DETAILS

In order to bring your story to life, you should provide as many sensory details as possible. This is another part of the “showing” versus “telling” issue.

The Five Senses (The physiological ways in which we perceive something.)

• Sight: How we see something and perceive it via a reaction between the eyes and the brain.
• Sound: How we hear something and perceive it audibly by vibrations in the eardrum.
• Taste: How we taste something and perceive it in a chemical reaction on the taste buds using one of the four types of tastes: sweet, salt, sour, and bitter.
• Smell: How we smell something and perceive it in a chemical reaction using olfactory receptors.
• Touch: How we touch something and perceive it using the neural receptors in the skin, hair follicles, tongue, throat, and mucosa.

Using the senses in writing

• Sight: What something looks like, where it is located, and how the character “sees” it.
• Sound: What a character hears in a scene, from a single sound to a cacophony of sounds.
• Taste: What a character experiences through eating or a memory of eating something. This is seldom used in all scenes.
• Smell: What a character smells in a scene. Often the sense of smell and taste are together.
• Touch: What textures a character feels in a scene.

Tips on when to use sensory details

• Use only the particular sensory details that are important to bring a scene to life for the reader.
• Sight is the most needed sensory description.
• Sound is the second most needed sensory description.
• It is not necessary to use all five senses in describing a scene. Too much description will slow 

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